Sunday, June 23, 2024

Stopping by the Sandy Bay on a Summer Evening...

  

 You are alone! said she.

Stopping by the paved road on a sandy bay.

Well, are you really alone? Look around you,

A sky painted with hues of pink, orange, and a dash of purple.

The retorting sounds of the migratory birds,

And all the quintessence of the natural world,

Are very much alive to keep you company.

The groggy mind responsible for the host of emotions and thoughts, that one feels is constantly reminding you about past incidents, and present and surprising you by giving a mini curtain raiser to what’s to follow.

Your very existence in the given surroundings with all the other elements merge as a complete entity mesmerizing and surprising you always.

You are not alone, says I.

 

 

                         

2 comments:

Bryce D'souza said...

This was quite an interesting style of writing - I believe a blend of first and third person, apt enough to give a vivid picturisation of thoughts and expressions!

~ Xena said...

Glad you liked it, Bryce. Thank you for dropping a comment on each post. Responses and Feedback like this inspire me to write to the best of my potential. Stay well

Stopping by the Sandy Bay on a Summer Evening...

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